What I think of my memory piece

I actually really quite like my sound piece and I am much happier with this artefact then I was with my previous one. I am very happy with the writing of the piece as I think the dialogue does flow and sound pretty natural. Due to the fact I used two people’s voices to put across the idea that everyone can get these feelings I think that some edits could have been cleaned up a little but all in all it is edited together really well. I think it could still use some work though due to the fact that I changed the script from being a film piece to being a sound alone piece. This means that some parts of the script really did need the aid of visuals to go along with them so that people got the proper idea of what was happening in the narrative. I think as a full video piece I would have been even happier with this artefact and it would have put across the idea of memories to the viewer really easily. I think that this piece could have also easily worked as a sound piece with photographs to go along with it. These could have been the same sort of visuals that I was thinking about when it was a video or they could be something different. Something along the lines of someone on their own at the beginning and then when the tone of the piece changes we could see pictures of a couple or something along the lines of that.

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